Instant Business Letters. Iain Maitland
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you have to, move on and finish.
Tone
Whatever the letter, try to project some personality into it. Attempt to be courteous and friendly even if you are writing a difficult letter, such as one which is demanding money. It costs nothing to be polite and to say ‘please’, ‘thank you’ and ‘sorry’, as appropriate. It also projects a dignified and positive image of you and your firm. Be sincere as well, attempting to write naturally in your own words. Don’t be reluctant to add personal touches when relevant, such as ‘Kind regards’ or ‘With good wishes’. Avoid giving the reader the impression that this is just another letter with little or no thought behind it – it isn’t!
Accuracy
Once the final version of the letter has been written or typed, it must be checked thoroughly again. The spelling and punctuation have to be perfect. An error can distract the recipient from your message, and does nothing to impress him or her about your expertise or standards of quality. A typographical mistake, for example, can not only make you look foolish but could be misleading as well: typing ‘right’ rather than ‘eight’ in the sentence ‘We want eight of these products’ could cause considerable confusion!
1.1: A draft of a letter
Dear Mr Tate
We’re sorry that the pushchairs delivered to you on 17 September were damaged. We think this must have happened on the van as our goods are always checked in the warehouse before being sent off.
We’re pleased to agree to your suggestion that we deliver replacement goods and collect and credit the damaged ones at the same time, which seems the fairest and quickest way of resolving the matter. Therefore we’ve instructed our despatch department and the carriers to do this for you.
Please accept our apologies for the trouble caused to you by this.
Yours sincerely
Rajesh Munglani
Sales Manager
1.2: The blocked format
Our ref: HEM/TL Your ref: RJD/BC
24 August 1996
Mr R J Dhalival
Mossman and Sons
20 – 26 Windmill Road
Littleton
Sussex
RH17 OYS
Dear Mr Dhalival
Re: Wayliner Mark II
Thank you for your catalogue and price list.
We enclose an order for your attention and ask you to deliver these goods to us at your earliest convenience.
We would be pleased to see your representative on a regular basis to discuss new lines and related matters. We look forward to his call.
Yours sincerely
Harold Mitchell
Proprietor
Enclosure
Copy: Rachel Cohen
1.3: The semi-blocked format
Our ref: JP/MA
12 September 1996
Debbie Taylor
Smart Moves
2–6 Brightwell Road
Esbury
Yorkshire
IP10 7NG
Dear Debbie
I write to introduce you to David Cooke who worked with me at Kaleidoscope for 12 years.
An innovative and hard working person, David is currently working on a new exercise cycle which may be of interest to you and will be contacting you in due course to arrange a meeting.
I am sure it would be very worthwhile for you to agree to see him.
Kind regards
Jacquie Phillips
Product Development Manager
1.4: The indented format
Our ref: DC/FT
18 October 1996
Mrs E Simpson
56 Amberley Crescent
Morden-on-Sea
Norfolk
NA12 4FR
Dear Mrs Simpson
Many thanks indeed for attending an interview with regard to our vacancy for a manager at our Todbury plant.
We have given your application careful consideration but regret to say that you have not been successful on this occasion.
We are sorry if this is a disappointment but hope you succeed in finding a suitable position soon.
Yours sincerely
Esus Tella
Partner
1.5: A final version of a letter
Our ref: RM/TM
Your ref: TT/FT
18 September 1996
Mr A P Tate
Babyland
20 Rydens Road
Tinheath
Warwickshire
CV17 ONB
Dear Mr Tate
We very much regret that the pushchairs delivered to you on 17 September were damaged. We can only assume that this must have occurred in transit as our goods are always inspected in our warehouse before being packed and despatched.
We are pleased to agree to your suggestion that we deliver replacement goods and collect and credit the damaged ones at the same time, which seems to be the fairest and quickest way of resolving the matter. Therefore, we have instructed our despatch department and the carriers to do this for you.
Please accept our apologies for the inconvenience caused to you on this occasion.
Yours sincerely
Rajesh Munglani
Sales Manager
Checklist Questionnaire
2.1: Acceptance of delayed delivery of goods
[DATE]
[NAME]
[ADDRESS]
Dear [NAME]
Thank you for your letter of [DATE], notifying us that there will be a delay in delivering order [NUMBER] dated [DATE] because of [REASONS].
I can confirm that we are prepared to accept a delayed delivery